
The two boys sat together both silent holding hands on a bench. The older one with darker skin and big brown eyes had already made up his mind. The younger with skin pale as the moon and too-long black hair had no idea what the older one would do. The older one who was actually named Gabe gripped the younger boys hand tighter feeling the tears in his eyes. "Te amo, Ryland." He whispered. Ryland just gave him a sad look before looking down to his feet. "Gabe." His voice was soft; regretful. "Gabe, I'm ending this. We're not made for each other. I found someone new. I. I'm sorry. I. I still love you." If the descision hadn't been made Gabe would had made it right then. //Two hours later.// He let the phone ring Once Twice Three times. He wouldn't have picked it up but something made it. "Hello?" "Te amo, Ryland..." "Gabe, please. I don't understand." "Pero no puedo hacer esto." "Gabe, PLEASE. I don't speak Spanish, and you're scaring me." "No soy bastante fuerte." "Gabe? Gabe?" "Adiós, mi amor." The gunshot and the groan. Then only the silence. What have I done? |
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Now, onto the actual comment...now go awaly....
The style reminds me soemwhat of some of hte stuff Sam's written.
It's cute at the beginning, nice discriptive words...
Ignore my craptastic spellign errors.
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~Ah, two hearts! Oh baby, I'm beating out a samba! Oh, he's slim - and a little bit foxy...You thought so too...you like it ~ [10th Doctor]
~I'm an Invisible Monster, and I'm incapable of Loving Anybody~ [Chuck Palahniuk]
Hello?"
"I love you, Ryland..."
"Gabe, please. I don't understand."
"But I cannot do this.."
"Gabe, PLEASE. I don't speak Spanish, and you're scaring me."
"I am not strong."
"Gabe? Gabe?"
"Goodbye, my love."
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Yellow Flowers and Fish.
You say were both little people && you like it that way~ <3.
And on the eighth day, God created Ben, Naoh, Chase and Berkii. And all way good. <3
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~Ah, two hearts! Oh baby, I'm beating out a samba! Oh, he's slim - and a little bit foxy...You thought so too...you like it ~ [10th Doctor]
~I'm an Invisible Monster, and I'm incapable of Loving Anybody~ [Chuck Palahniuk]
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Don't you think I could tell that you were trying to, trying to make a fool out of me. a fool out of me?
SHAMELESS SELF PROMOTION: [link]
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Yellow Flowers and Fish.
You say were both little people && you like it that way~ <3.
And on the eighth day, God created Ben, Naoh, Chase and Berkii. And all way good. <3
But i still adore it!
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Yellow Flowers and Fish.
You say were both little people && you like it that way~ <3.
And on the eighth day, God created Ben, Naoh, Chase and Berkii. And all way good. <3
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