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DesignerDrugs DesignerFriends. by ~twitchablewiz13:icontwitchablewiz13:






The two boys sat together
both silent
holding hands on a bench.
The older one
with darker skin
and big brown eyes
had already made up his mind.
The younger
with skin pale as the moon
and too-long black hair
had no idea what the older one would do.
The older one
who was actually named Gabe
gripped the younger boys hand tighter
feeling the tears in his eyes.
"Te amo, Ryland."
He whispered.
Ryland just gave him a sad look
before looking down to his feet.
"Gabe." His voice was soft; regretful.
"Gabe, I'm ending this.
We're not made for each other.
I found someone new.
I.
I'm sorry.
I.
I still love you."
If the descision hadn't been made
Gabe would had made it right then.

//Two hours later.//

He let the phone ring
Once
Twice
Three times.
He wouldn't have picked it up
but something made it.
"Hello?"
"Te amo, Ryland..."
"Gabe, please. I don't understand."
"Pero no puedo hacer esto."
"Gabe, PLEASE. I don't speak Spanish, and you're scaring me."
"No soy bastante fuerte."
"Gabe? Gabe?"
"Adiós, mi amor."
The gunshot and the groan.
Then only the silence.

What have I done?
©2008-2009 ~twitchablewiz13
:icontwitchablewiz13:

Author's Comments

I am like, extremly proud of this.
I really have no idea where it came from.

originally, the phone call came first.
But i changed mt mind =]

Ummmm. Let's just say. Ry's going out with...hm. The Butcher, er something. =]

I seriously love this <3 I just DO.

I should probably translate Gabe's Spanish.
But I'm N.O.T. G.O.N.N.A.
If you SERIOUSLY needa know, note me ;D

Music Mood: Guilty Pleasure - Cobra Starship

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:iconflame-sniper1313:
I SRSLY NEED TO KNOW, SO GO LOOK IT UP N TELL ME, CUZ YOU KNOW I'M TOO LAZY.

Now, onto the actual comment...now go awaly....

The style reminds me soemwhat of some of hte stuff Sam's written.

It's cute at the beginning, nice discriptive words...

Ignore my craptastic spellign errors.

--
~I'm an Invisible Monster, and I'm incapable of Loving Anybody~ [Chuck Palahniuk]
I :heart: Adam Burbank Lazzara. LOTS.
~Sesshie32 is my husband. :heart:
:icontwitchablewiz13:
Here, i'll just resend the end with english.

Hello?"
"I love you, Ryland..."
"Gabe, please. I don't understand."
"But I cannot do this.."
"Gabe, PLEASE. I don't speak Spanish, and you're scaring me."
"I am not strong."
"Gabe? Gabe?"
"Goodbye, my love."

--
Yellow Flowers and Fish.
And all I know is when I move away, my heart will stay in this midwestern state.
i've got troubled thoughts && the self esteem to match.

hats for Pat! <3
:iconflame-sniper1313:
k thnx bby

--
~I'm an Invisible Monster, and I'm incapable of Loving Anybody~ [Chuck Palahniuk]
I :heart: Adam Burbank Lazzara. LOTS.
~Sesshie32 is my husband. :heart:
:icontwitchablewiz13:
THANK YOU. =]

--
Yellow Flowers and Fish.
And all I know is when I move away, my heart will stay in this midwestern state.
i've got troubled thoughts && the self esteem to match.

hats for Pat! <3
:icontrohmanic:
that made me really really sad. :(
But i still adore it!
:icontwitchablewiz13:
=] thank you.

--
Yellow Flowers and Fish.
And all I know is when I move away, my heart will stay in this midwestern state.
i've got troubled thoughts && the self esteem to match.

hats for Pat! <3

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